After two years of writer's block, something *FINALLY* forced its way out of the ether. :) This is the result... apologizes if it meanders a bit, but it's been a while since I did any writing at all. :)
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Their voices were hushed, fearful… aware that if the parental
units heard them, they stood the chance of having their discovery taken
away from them.
"Is it still alive?"
"Yeah… yeah, I think so." A pause. "Yeah, it's still moving."
"What do you think it is?"
"I dunno! Ain't like no butterfly I've ever seen!"
A thump and a squawk of pain was heard as the boy rapped his younger
sister on the noggin with a knuckle. "Stupid! This isn't a
butterfly. Butterflies don't have feet or hands."
"So it's a… fairy?"
"I… I don't think so, fairies are supposed to be human, just tiny. This thing's got fur, and spikes, and…"
Both children gasped in surprise as the light was turned on in the
bedroom and a large man walked in. He chuckled down at them and
said, "Ok, you two, what've you got there?"
"N… nothing, daddy." The little girl tried in vain to hide the shoebox behind her, her eyes wide in fear.
"Come on, let me see it." The man held his hand out to his
daughter, and after a final reluctant look at the box, she handed it to
him. He opened the edge of the box and peered inside,
chuckling. "Aw, a monarch butterfly. Poor thing's wounded,
too. Where'd you find this?"
The children exchanged a look of confusion. Couldn't he
see… Finally the son spoke. "In… in the forest,
dad. It was lying on the ground, and we thought…"
"… that you'd bring it home and nurse it back to health."
The man smiled wider. "You kids have good hearts, you really
do. But I'm afraid it's just a butterfly, it's not likely to live
through the night. I should…"
"Daddy!" The little girl sprang forward, clinging on the man's
leg tightly. "Please let us keep it! Please please please
please please!"
"Oh, all right." The father chuckled, ruffling his daughter's
hair with bemusement. "Not like it eats much, after all.
I'll tell your mother not to disturb the shoebox… but remember,
it's a butterfly, so it'll want room to move around if it starts to get
better. You might want to think about where to keep it once it
starts flapping its wings again."
"We will, dad."
* * *
"I can't believe how long that butterfly's lived, Mary." Dan
shook his head. "I didn't think monarch butterflies lived past a
season or two, but here it's been three years and that thing's still
fluttering away in their room."
Mary smiled, adjusting her position slightly to accommodate her
protesting, kicking belly. "Lisa loves that little thing, I'm
glad it's made it this long. Ow." She winced as a rather
violent kick rippled across her shirt front. "I think I've got a
soccer player in here, I swear."
Dan rested his hand on his wife's stomach lovingly. "Well, it'll
be the last time you have to worry about any of our kids beating up
your organs, dear… I think three's plenty for us."
"Fine by me. If you want any more, YOU can carry the next one,
mister!" Laughing, husband and wife shared a kiss…
Breaking off when a loud crash came from the living room.
Frowning, Dan stood up and started toward the living room when two
large men burst into the kitchen. One of them immediately slammed
a crowbar down, slamming Dan against the refrigerator. With a
moan, he dropped to the floor, unconscious.
Mary's shriek of fear was cut off when the other man clamped a massive,
dirty hand over her mouth and hissed, "Ooo, yer a pretty one!
Gonna have some fun…"
"Mom?"
The two men turned as the little girl stared wide-eyed at the scene
before her. For a heartbeat, the mother and daughter's eyes
locked…
And the man who'd attacked her father started toward her.
Shrieking in fear, Lisa tore off toward her room, slamming the door
shut behind her as she dived underneath the bed. Footsteps
quickly followed, and one of the two intruders stood in her doorway,
chuckling malevolently.
"Where, oh where, could the little one be…"
Lisa watched in horror as the man's legs came closer and closer to the
bed… until finally, a slight motion behind the man caught her
attention. A sense of calm washed over her, and she smiled.
She continued smiling even as the man picked up the edge of the bed and grinned nastily at her.
When she didn't react, he frowned. "Whatchoo smilin' at, you little whore?"
"I think my butterfly wants to have a word with you."
"Your what?" He glanced in the direction she'd indicated, and for a moment he stared in total disbelief…
His scream of terror was cut off abruptly as all the lights in the house went out.
* * *
The policeman scratched underneath his hat in confusion. After another moment, he shrugged and picked up his phone.
"Yeah, Chief, it looks like everyone's going to be alright. The
father looks like he's going to need some stitches and the wife's got
some bruising from where the intruders were holding her… no, no,
she wasn't raped, but I'd be willing to bet if they'd stuck around
longer it'd have been a real possibility."
"Kids were both fine. The son was out of the house entirely, and
the daughter apparently was hiding in her room… yeah…
yeah… yep, so everyone's safe and sound, and nothing of value
was removed from the house."
"Still, it's the weirdest thing. The descriptions of the two from
the daughter and mother match the pair we've been looking for, but
they've never just abandoned their target like that before. The
mother can't remember what happened, she was too panicked to really pay
attention to anything around her until it was all over."
"The girl?"
The policeman chuckled. "Typical kid, Chief. She claims her
butterfly ate both of em. She kept insisting, so I humored her
and looked in her room. Meanest looking monarch butterfly I've
ever seen, I'm telling ya." He chuckled again. "Good to
know it's not going to traumatize her, since the mother looks to be
about eight or nine months pregnant… not going to be a whole lot
of spare money for therapy once that happy package arrives."
The policeman paused for a moment. "Still… There was a
trace of blood on her carpet that looked fresh, but… what's
that? Ok, Chief, I'll wrap it up here and give my report when I
arrive… but yeah, it looks like they got away clean."
| Date | Name | Comment | | | 27 Aug 2008 | Michal Nymeria Goderez | Loading...HA i love this. i was grinning by the end. it mkes me curious though what this creature is that all adults see it as monarch butterfly...but you don’t even need to know to love it.  -nym Matthew T. Summers replies: "Hehee, thanks. I’m not 100% sure what it was either... and I’m a bit afraid to find out.  Glad you liked it!
>Matt" | |
| 27 Aug 2008 | Joelle Duran | Loading...Congrats on breaking the writer’s block, Matt! *hugs* This was great! Dying to know what the kids could see and the adults couldn’t (and what it ate for three years, etc). I hope this is just the beginning of more great reads to come. Wishing you the best. =D Matthew T. Summers replies: "it was small, I’m sure it didn’t eat much... dust, candy, the occasional neighbor... 
>Matt" | |
| 28 Aug 2008 | Chris A Jackson | Loading...Very nice! I would have gone for a little more macabre, like the criminals’ empty clothes lying in the bedroom and the living room with not a trace of the men... But that would have been too much, I think... Yeah, I like the way you did it. Nice story, and a nice way to break the block... Now, keep going. Heh, heh... Matthew T. Summers replies: "I thought about making it a lot more evil, like what you’d mentioned... but it didn’t feel right, so I left it out.
Haven’t written anything since this, but it’s been less than a week, so no worries. 
>Matt" | |
| 1 Sep 2008 | Sarah-amy haley | Loading...Cool, entertaining story, loved the realness of it all. Really worked!! ~  Keep the writter’s block at bay... Matthew T. Summers replies: "Hehee, thanks!" | |
| 12 Nov 2008 | Anon. | Loading...Way to go, Matt!! Writer’s block successfully broken! And what a story! Ooooh, wish we could actually SEE that little imp. What a wonderful critter to have around the house... (I could really USE something like that for those pesky folks who block my sidewalk and the front of my house on bingo nights.... They refuse to park in the parking lot where they belong.) Anyway, I love the plot progression. And even though we all seem to be curious about the "butterfly’s" true form, I really think the story had more impact by the fact that you hid that information from us!
Very nicely done, my friend! | |
| 12 Nov 2008 | Deb Cullins Smith | Loading...The above comment is MINE, Matt!!! It says I’m signed in at the bottom of the screen, but it didn’t log me in correctly.... Darn computers.... | |
| 12 Feb 2009 | Hidan | Loading...very cool! i like the way you never really know what it is, but the kid seems use to it eating things... wonder if they had a dog when they found the ’butterfly’  | |
| 17 Apr 2011 | Anon. | Loading...it was very amusing but i was curios to know what the creature was  | |
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