It’s odd that the loudest sound I’ve ever heard is
that of
the drip, drip, drip of my lifeblood ebbing away. It
wasn’t
always that way, of course…
It was supposed to be just a nice, quiet country drive, something nice
and mindless to clear my head. The wife and I had been
fighting,
yet another fight over something as stupid as money.
Money.
God Almighty, I’d trade all the money in the world to not be
wrapped around this tree right now… I…
I’m going to
miss her.
I love her. Lord, please watch over her, I pray…
it occurs
to me that I’m not going to get to see my
daughter’s violin
recital in a few months, nor am I going to get to see my two sons
graduate college. I won’t get to watch any of em
fall in
love, get married, and have multiple grandchildren for me to spoil
rotten, fill up with sugar and ship em home as the ultimate parental
revenge.
I won’t get to watch my Maria grow old… I
won’t be
there with her, holding her hand and watching the sun set on that
Hawaiian vacation I’d always promised her, but could never
afford. There won’t be the making up from this
fight, the
warm caresses in the middle of the night, that adorable shriek she
makes when a spider dares to enter our threshold…
… I would cry, but that damnable drip, drip, drip of my
lifeblood onto the car seat is taking all the energy from me.
I hear movement, something only slightly louder than my blood dripping
away. It takes every ounce of strength I have to tear my eyes
away from the slow stream of… well, me… leaking
away.
This has to be a hallucination. I truly am dying now, I know
it. Two small creatures have emerged from the tree that I
slammed
into and are looking around in shock. Admittedly, if
they’re real, I just wrapped my car into their home going
about
sixty-five miles an hour… they’re probably quite
shaken up
as well.
Oh look, they’ve noticed the blood pooling near their tree,
and
by process of elimination, noticed me as well. Oddly enough,
they
show no fear as they gaze up at my eyes; perhaps it’s because
they can tell I’m dying. Lord knows, I certainly
can’t LOOK like I’m in my top shape, what with this
oak
branch stuck through my chest cavity and all.
They started to talk to each other, a really odd, high-pitched
chirping. Kinda reminds me of sparrows, like the ones that
flit
around near the birdfeeder my daughter made in class last
year.
I’m able to understand the sparrows about as much as I can
these
two things before me, mind you.
Apparently a decision was made, because they both nodded and turned
back to me. Oh how cute… They’re doing
some sort of
Harry Potter thing, weaving their hands about and muttering
words… Heh. If I believed in magic, I’d
think
they’re trying some sort of…
… That… that’s a pretty bright
light…
I screamed as pain shot through me, pain like nothing I’ve
ever
felt before. Oddly enough, the pain from the car wreck still
hadn’t registered to my mind. Shock, I
suppose. But
light flared out from the hands of these…
creatures… and
filled my body, and pain unimaginable struck me from head to toe.
I continued to scream as inch by inch, the car and, by association, my
body was moved away from the tree. The oak limb that had
thrust
itself deep into my chest crept inexorably backwards, ripping already
savagely-damaged muscle and tissues as it went. Tears sprang
from
my eyes, unbidden and uncontrollable, as I could feel my skin being
first ripped asunder, then forcibly fused back together again by the
creatures’ magic.
Mercifully, it was at that point that I passed out, even as I
vaguely recognized red and blue flashing lights off in the
distance. When I came back to reality, it took me quite a
while
to recognize the fact that I was in a hospital, with my wife and kids
at my side.
* * *
That was years ago, but the memory of it is still as clear to me as my
own reflection in the mirror. The next few months, of course,
were a blur. They told me that it was a miracle that I
survived,
that the car had somehow just missed hitting the tree dead-on, and that
slight deflection was enough to not kill me outright.
I know better, of course. But who would believe me?
Maria and I never again fought over money. Between the months
upon years of rehabilitation before I could walk again, the sheer
insane cost of the hospital stay, and pills upon pills for pain and
infection during my recovery, money just wasn’t an issue
anymore. It was simple, we never had any of it anymore, so
why
argue over such a moot point?
Our relationship improved to the point where we were the envy of all of
our friends. During every spasm, during every painful step
along
my rehabilitation, during the screaming fits I’d have at
night
during the nightmares… she was there by my side, holding my
hand
and telling me that it would all be alright.
I kiss her every morning when we wake, and every night before we go to
bed. I have not even remotely come close to overusing the
words,
“I love you,” at least to my ears yet.
My kids, though they’ve flown the coop, still keep in touch
almost daily. Katie, our youngest, just had our first
grandchild,
a pretty little thing that she is going to bring visiting once her
husband has more time off built up. Ethan joined the Marines,
the
last news I got from him was that he was going on a deployment
somewhere, and would bring us back something from wherever that
was. We’ll be seeing Freddie here in the next few
weeks,
he’s just finished up his doctorate and is coming home to
finally
marry his high school sweetheart.
Life’s funny, I suppose… but I don’t
have to tell
you this, now do I? I don’t know if
you’re still in
this tree, here at the scene of the accident; that horrible, that
blessed accident that finally forced me to turn my life around.
I’ve told only Maria about what I saw, so you know.
She’s certain that it was nothing more than a drug-induced
hallucination, or perhaps my imagination playing tricks on me as I was
lying here, dying.
But I know better. And I still cannot thank you
enough. I
know you’re not going to come out of your tree, not while
I’m standing here and certainly not with those strange people
putting those fences up around this forest. But I wanted to
reassure you that those people are here to help me protect you.
You see, ironically enough, once all the medical bills were paid, I was
able to return financial stability to my family. And now,
well,
we’re quite well off, and I have enough money left over from
some
well-timed investments that I was able to purchase this large plot of
forest that was slated for demolition.
Rest assured, my friends, your forest isn’t going to go
anywhere. No supermarket, no large retail chain or car
dealership
is going to take away this section of forest. The purchase is
complete, the fences are going up, and I’m going to set it in
my
will that this forest remain pristine for as long as my estate has the
funds to keep it up.
I thank you for my gift, my little friends… and I hope you
enjoy
yours as well. Sleep well as civilization rises around you,
and
know that this is only a small part me thanking you. I can
never
repay you enough for changing my life as you did… saving
your
home is the least I can do.
Sleep well, my friends… sleep well.
| Date | Name | Comment | | | 5 Jan 2011 | Jess Hyslop | Loading...*first comment hula* (Wow, haven’t done that in a while!) Aw, how lovely  What a nice little story - and funny, too. I think what I enjoyed most about it was the vivid voice, which was pitched just right - witty and yet poignant - and really garnered my affection as it went on. And I particularly liked the narrator’s reaction to the little tree-creatures. Typo spot: ’this is only a small part me thanking you’ --> *of* me Small crit: ’I hear movement, something only slightly louder than my blood dripping away.’ --> Since the opening sentence specifies that ’the loudest sound I’ve ever heard is that of the drip, drip, drip of my lifeblood ebbing away’, and that this part is narrated in retrospect, it seems odd that the narrator contradicts himself like this. Whilst I understand that the first sentence is hyperbolic/figurative, it’s so striking that the contradiction draws attention anyway... Thanks for sharing this! Matthew T. Summers replies: "Yeah, unfortunately, my little shelf here doesn’t have nearly the visitors it used to have, so some of these things have had zero comments on em for some time. So a well earned hula!
Glad you liked it. The first part is, as you said, more figurative than hard fact. He was referring more to how his attention was so focused on his blood dripping away that nothing else really mattered. " | |
| 28 Jan 2011 | Heather M Sellers | Loading...I love your way of bringing subtle magic into the world, makes very believable Matthew T. Summers replies: "Thank you. Glad you liked it." | |
| 4 May 2012 | MeKayla Awesome Dragon Pahl | Loading...Wow. This is good. One thing, though. The word lifeblood. I can swallow it the first time, sure, but it’s such an unusual word that, the second time it’s used, it stands out, making it a bit redundant. Other than that little thing, though, awesome job! | |
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